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Monday, April 24, 2006

The End ...


He stepped on the muddy off-road strolling his buggy as no man was visible at the running hour - he, all by himself. The murky fog swooping down the path, buried sun under the clouds, waning brisk breeze, and birds chanting as he staggered along to work. His almost-stainless slippers grating along the roughed road, as he kept going.

He wore white, a dhoti with his sleeveless shirt - pale white, laundered. His eyes, clear, certain, glaring straight at half-shrouded-fog path. He would carry on pulling his buggy as his senile feet kept him moving, which he did everyday, every morning, for the past eighteen years. He felt that first sweat on his forehead, as he slowed down, and stopped. He sagged down on his knees, resting his head with the buggy - as he never moved again. He fell a sleep forever, on that very path.

They say he was 82, a highly well-educated man, and probably the smartest flavoured-juice seller ever to have stepped on earth. They called him Ba Alim Sherbutwala (Wise Father, Flavoured-juice seller)

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The Wise Man

8 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

end of life...end of life drama!
end of his character in this life drama!
the end!

3:12 AM  
Blogger M said...

Wise man- didnt reek of his 80s.
Again, a lot to learn..

Still soo much to go.

12:21 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

why viks why...why we are judged the way it should'nt be...why just they don't stop doing it...why they are so very much one sided while judging anyone???
hah...so many f**king why's!

5:29 AM  
Blogger coco jumbo said...

once again, viks back in the flow.

2:35 PM  
Blogger meshwork said...

finally ...someone decided to post something...

life is tough.. very
tough....everyone's trying to survive...
ba alim sherbet wala...?? just the name of a character in vick's story .. or a character in the story of life....

6:23 AM  
Blogger Viks said...

an illus|on, mishtery, and viscous ::: Thanks for the comments :o)

mehwhish ::: Just a character - at least for now!

8:54 PM  
Blogger coco jumbo said...

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9:08 PM  
Blogger watersprite said...

Did his gnarled old hands shake?
Did he stand at a corner, selling his assorted juice?
Did he smile?
Did he have someone waiting at home for him?
Did he share his knowledge?

Just trying to visualize and imagine and finally I do see.

This one is good Viks, I love the name - Ba Alim Sherbutwala.

Keep your stories coming. They are a treat.

1:50 PM  

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