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Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Tuesday, October 18, 2005

If it may be ...

Puddle of sand still wet

Water leak, thoughts seep

Iris still endow thy light

Eyes open, thou' sight astray

Words of hope still ensue

Silent lips, ill vie whisper

May howl due of grief?

Scarce sound, tears dry

Cave soul or ash me all?

Parch cadaver, else more!

What may ever born of me,

Sink all - for just peace

5 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

good work!! me likes lots :D

3:35 PM  
Blogger Sadaff said...

a lovely piece after another. always a pleasure.

12:01 AM  
Blogger Viks said...

anonymous: Thanks ;)

sadaf: Appreciated :o)

6:15 PM  
Blogger anum; said...

i'm amazed
you make sense...or my blog makes sense to you... somehow

8:07 AM  
Blogger suumz said...

i read it somewhere,or so the sayin goes...everything we write be it fiction or reality, is from the soul.dont know which piece i liked the best..but they all were worth reading.hope u find what u are looking for.

8:42 AM  

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